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My Smiley Story
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| Photograph | Date: Friday, 2009-10-02, 6:04 AM | Message # 2 |
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| hmmm i liked the beginning but i think the plot needs more work, and what was with that ending, a bit cliche  
Sig by: Yoshino (>'.')>
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| Decode | Date: Friday, 2009-10-02, 6:37 AM | Message # 3 |
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| It's a homocide story, what do you expect, yea the plot needs more work.
I know my heights, and I have yet to be pushed to my limits.
The little things mean most to me, so a simple comment could make my day.
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| Flaze | Date: Saturday, 2009-10-03, 4:28 AM | Message # 4 |
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| Epic Story Gabe xD i loved it ( have no clue what it says ) lol
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| LucienWolf | Date: Saturday, 2009-10-03, 5:13 AM | Message # 5 |
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| Neither do I
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