Work on perfecting text
Tbh, he needs to stop editing his text. It ruins the signature as a whole. Other then that, tone down the amount of 'focal points' It's really distracting. Henceforth ruining the signature as a whole... again.
A lot better then the shiznit I could do when I was playing with the text too much.
Only thing I can say that would help you, use short simply and to the point text. Have ONLY 1 FOCAL POINT. And Read some more tutorials. :)<3
Images like the one found here, http://i43.tinypic.com/be7xuo.png or http://i187.photobucket.com/albums/x57/Sanouske3/bobosig45.png , are what I'm striving for in the future for myself.
~Sorry I can't use image tags. lol